User blog comment:Mectrixctic/Nightmare Epic- End/@comment-113335-20100427213006

Ugh...


 * "torture and maim her in extreme ways, such as crushing her bones and peeling off her skin and flesh"
 * While extreme torture and pain is legal, you can't do that. It's too gruesome and descriptive. Keep it short and sweet. Nightmare just rips her legs off, or something.


 * "He sees Kill bleeding, screaming, coughing up her blood, and having muscle spasms."
 * Again, ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! Now, Kill can be in immense pain and what-not, but really? Some of us can picture that, and it is in direct violation of the COC. It is an overly detailed/agonizingly slow death. Death must be instantenous without suffering. Just squash her.


 * "He can't stand that the person he loves the most is in this condition, but can't heal her, as every hospital in Antarctica is now evacuated."
 * There are medics on the field. I'm sure a doctor could safe her.


 * "He finds a snowgun on the ground and shoots her with it, ending her life."
 * That's just wrong. No, simply no.

I for one think that you're really going too far with Kill. Seriously, what did she do to you? She's a pretty character with a possible personality and future, and everyone just whacks her and uses her as a tool. It's rather depressing. I don't think that any Antarctican villain could muster up the heartless evil needed to rip off someone's flesh and crush their bones without having them die as soon as that happens. Even if they could, this is a kid's site.

However, the trouble lies that if we don't kill Kill, ZK won't activate Deletion Apocalypse. I propose that Nightmare, with Zone watching, crush her with his own body or weapon, or something. In that way, the same event will trigger without all of the gore.

The site promises not to be a land of misery or ruin peoples' days. If I read of all of that violence against poor, innocent Kill, I would definately be upset.

-- † TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! †    :)  :) Hey George... ...you forgot Halliburton. † 21:30, April 27, 2010 (UTC)