User talk:Swiss Ninja

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In addition, I highly do not want inappropriate language on this page! NO EXCEPTIONS!!

Thank you!

--Swiss Ninja Come see me when you can! 02:51, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

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BOOYAH FOREVER!, -- Explorer 767 (Talk) 03:15, July 23, 2009

Re:FOOL!
Yeah, Mr. High Expectations. Here's My Answers.


 * One. REDUNDANT PLOT DEVICES. RDA helicopters storming in that don't do anything. A giant energy ball that doesn't get shot.

A:WRONG! The RDA Helicopters where attacking the enemy the whole time. The Energy Ball was going to be shot until Pen chi teleported them away.

'''RE: Not really. No description. Whatsoever.'''


 * Two. No challenges for the Hochstadt Gang. They burn through EVERY SINGLE enemy in the story with ease. Nobody even gets hurt. Give them a challenge.

A:I Don't like injuring my characters. I have experienced pain in my life, so I don't like going there. Besides, Fuut Ga was nearly Blown UP in the Mystery of Pen Chi, and you're still not happy? SHAME!

'''RE: Pain's a good thing. (Sort of.) Makes you stronger. And he didn't get blown up. Most of the injuries should be MINOR. Like bruises and cuts.


 * Three. Fight Scenes. I hate to say this, but your fight scenes are MISERABLE. You go into NO DETAIL, don't describe enemies getting hurt (which is sometimes good and sometimes not), and only the bad guys get beaten up.

A:I'm too busy or caught up in something else than to rather go into detail. I hate Blood and Gore. Especially gore. Like before, I dont like writing about pain.

'''RE: I don't use blood and gore! See The Mystery of Pen Chi! Just bruises and smacking. Nobody gets seriously hurt, but it was a good battle.


 * Four. Character personalization. Sorry, but sometimes your characters are...generic. Corai is scared. That's it. Explorer's just...there. Nothing else. He says random stuff. That's not right. Explorer stands out! He's the life of the crowd. Dave hasn't gotten any attention, Clovis is generally ignored, and Jock rarely gets the limelight. It's basically Piper, Fisch, and Fuut-Ga.

A:WRONG AGAIN FOOL. Jock has contributed A LOT to my stories. He led the Gang when Fisch was Missing back in the Quest for Fisch, and is the Master of Piper. Fuut Ga is still a brand new character, so you can't judge him on that yet. Jock is going to be the Main character for the GSWIV.

'''RE: That's not the main problem. Piper REALLY annoys me. He's just...not believable.'''


 * Five. Character Interaction. Normally, it's just one or two characters talking. You should have each character speak, and with personalized comments. And the conversations aren't...real. Too serious. Clovis and Explorer would probably interuppt a lot. 

A:Wrong. The Gang makes plenty of Jokes....usually coming from Clovis. Plus, the Gang seems to always talk.

'''RE: You don't use Explorer properly. And you ignore Corai (sometimes) and some others.'''


 * Six. Pathetic Enemies. Great Viking War was ended by a speech. Same with GSWIII. GSWI was really anti-climatic. Pen Chi's hideout was UNDER A ROCK. Quest for Yilk, they had NO PROBLEM going past Swiss and his army. Quest for Fisch...same.

A:I thought it would be funny to have the gang find Pen Chi hiding in a Cave that's covered by a rock.

'''RE: Not really funny. And that's not on the Pathetic Enemies subject.


 * Seven. Anti-Climatic Endings. Seriously? Most of your endings tend to be a little boring and anti-climatic, I'd work on that.

A:Nothing to say here. Be more Specific, fool.

''' RE: Since you have nothing to say, YOU FOOL! STOP CALLING ME FOOL! '''


 * Eight. They work great together. The Hochstadt Gang rarely hinders itself, though Fisch and Explorer wouldn't get along, Piper and Akbaboy don't get along, Clovis wouldn't go well with Serious Buisness Fuut-Ga, and Corai barely ever says anything.

A:Again, this question is Folly. This is the HOCHSTADT GANG. I don't think you know what a Gang is if you don't have teamwork. Yes, they argue, (I have made that happen, fool), but Everyone has to SET ASIDE their differences and help out. This is how Society should be. Well, it should be, but Society is all folly...

'''RE: Gang's often don't teamwork perfectly like they do in the stories. Ever had a group project? They don't work that well. Soloing the project is more effective and better. Groups often argue. And the Hochstadt Gang doesn't. Swiss isn't a mary sue. The Hochstadt Gang is.


 * Nine. Too many characters! The Hochstadt Gang is almost 12 people now.

A:The More the Merrier. You and everyone else are so paranoid of having TOO MUCH PEOPLE. There is NEVER ENOUGH Boss, or whatever. BOSS make this place a better one! ACHEIVEMENT FOOL! ACHIEVEMENT!

'''RE: Too many cooks in the kitchen often burn their butts. Or spoils the recipe. You get the idea.'''


 * Ten. Short Chapters. Bro, your earlier stories had WAY more chapters. Now they only have five or six. 

A:I usually do this on purpose either because I have nothing to write or that I want to rush to a new story.

'''RE: Don't rush. It makes your stories worse.'''

Oh, and by the way, I WANTED Pen Chi to be Captured.

RE: TS and Explorer said no.

But NO, you had to continue it after I was going to move on to another story!!!!!!

@$#%^^&*!!!

RE: That's really mature.