Talk:Outer Haven

This is a great article. It contains lots of information about the country and things like that, but there are a few problems.


 * 1) The article breaks continuity somewhat. The War of Frozen Fury has not been written yet, and we already have lots of wars in Antarctic history (see Khanzem and Great Darktonian Pie War). Also, it mentions that soldiers all over the world come here because they have been mistreated in their homelands. The COC forbids real-world references, and it's a bit OOC for penguins to mistreat each other. Also, Club Penguin is too small to hold a fortress this size, so this country would need its own server.
 * 2) There are no links to other articles, or mentions of other pre-existing articles, which further breaks continuity.

The article will be edited for continuity soon. Thank you!  Yours "Falsely",   Explorer 767 ( The Nerd Quibbles On...  )    View this template   19:42, 31 July 2009 (UTC)