Forum:Story Help!!!

Hi! I'm going to make a superhero story, since it is needed. Let me explain the plot.

And insane bad guy has the power of deletion. When charged enough, he can delete anything. He has this plan to delete the USA. He has to charge his powers enough, and the only place to charge it that much, is the Deletion Missile Pyramid. The DMP holds all the deletion missiles that the USA has. It is guarded by an army.

The baddie recruits an army of Demon Penguins, and began to march towards DMP.

The Defenders arrive to guard the DMP. They manage to hold the baddie off, until the Demon Penguins arrive. The baddie goes into the pyramid and abosrbs all the energy. All the enregy is transported into a sphere. The sphere is about to go off and delete Antarctica, until One-Eye takes a sword and stabs the sphere, which implodes, causing the sword, which is attached to One Eye, and the baddie to be sucked into the sphere, and deleted.

After the crisis, the superhero community comes to One-Eye's funeral. After the funeral, a mysterious penguin comes up to his coffin, and picks up his glasses. The penguin's skin glows, then stops. HE THEN PUTS ON sunglasses, which turn red.

I CAN'T PULL OFF THIS STORY WITHOUT MOAR SUPERHEROES! I NEED YOUR HELP!!!

We got parodies of superheroes, now we need original!!

The Defenders has very little members, and the death of One-Eye would make it worse!!

I NEED MOAR SUPERHEROES!!

So please, if you have any superhero ideas, please post them below.

-- Happyface ( Just Say Hi) ☺  01:30, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

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