Forum talk:Crash of the Universes

Genius!
I love it, but I would like to suggest a few changes.


 * Instead of G being bored with the universe, use some Canonicals and have G want to explorer new frontiers. He invents the device and goes to the CPB for exploring reasons, not boredom with his life. He wants to view more universes in the names of Adventure and Science.


 * Instead of Antarctic Cock, which, in America, is a swear word for a reproduction organ, it should be Antarctic Cockeral, the formal term for a rooster. "Cocky" and "Cockeral" lack unholy allusions.


 * Can Jeffery Shroomsky play a part? His obbsession with the rules would make for an interesting addition to the tale.


 * Can some of G's Family go with him?


 * Who else will join G on his quest for adventure?

Most importantly... will this tale be on this site, the CPB, or CPFF?


 * OR, better yet will portions of the story be here, portions of the story be on CPB, and portions on CPFF, all linked together with a navigational template?!
 * Posting bits and peices of all the story on all three sites with a link box would be GREAT for all three site's publicity!

I can't wait to begin!! It's brilliant!

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