User blog comment:Flywish/My drawing/@comment-2110305-20100721095726

Can I give you some constructive critism? Okay.

The penguin's shape goes upwards and not completely round at the top.

The flippers are perfect.

The beak is good, but the white fur part on the belly connects to the beak.

The eyes do not round at the bottom, they also connect to the beak.

And the feet are good, but they're a bit square.

I'm not insulting your imaging, I just think you need practise. If you want help, I'll be happy to.

-- '''Metalmanager  talk page   contributions  09:57, July 21, 2010 (UTC)