User blog comment:Ninjinian/Stories to Write + A New Series!/@comment-1473391-20091208004046

Ok, let's just get this out of the way. Corai, you have to expand your horizons a bit. (Scratch that. Make it a whole lot) All you ever do is write about Corai and how one of your characters is beaten up daily by another one of your characters. (Besides the fact I disapprove of the mindless violence, it's boring and repetitive. And even in the real show you based some of your characters on, that evil doctor is barely ever beaten up.) You've GOT to create new characters and things that are NOT about Doctor Surray, Terry, Ethan, and Corai. (Plus, you made two "stalker" characters: Ethan (who stalks Mabel) and Dara (or whatever you call her) Who is obsessed with and stalks Corai.) Now, I don't know if stalk is the write word to use here, but that's besides the point. Oh, and on top of all THOSE things, you have (ahem, excuse the comment) "poor" grammar, which drives ME crazy, forcing me to fix every single mistake (which is about the entire page) on the article. All right, I'd said I'm about done here. Sorry if I offended you or upset you in any way. In no means necessary do you have you listen to me. Sorry about my rant.